1. Could give a better description of Bounce in your ounce poster
-Who was the target audience of the music? How were the adults affected? Did they enjoy or even notice the popular music in the background? Did they notice the television that was on as well?
-Talk about samples and flavors more and how they are effective in attracting the target audience...
2. Yo! is a small space but large enough to hold a few large groups of people (college students travel in groups)
- A line is usually formed at the checkout- but it is a simple process - only one worker is necessary
-Talk about flavors (smell and taste oberservations)
3.Talk about colors and appeal to young adults as apposed to young children
-Talk about the different posters and how they appeal to the target audiences
I think that it is interesting that you point out a few times that college student will frequently be at this place. You could really focus on describing what exactly appeals to the college aged person. The posters, or facility colors would be a good focus but one thing I would consider is the general location of the space.
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